正版刀仔 2008-6-30 21:54
[音乐心情]HEAL THE WORLD------让我们忘记伤痛
一场突然其来的地震,使千千万万幸福的家庭,刹时间掩埋在无情的砖瓦下。一双双悲痛的眼睛,一只只等待温暖的小手,一个个失去亲人的孩子,牵动着一颗颗跳动的心-------[color=red]heal the world,make it a better place,for you and for me and the entire human race……
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一场无情的雪灾,席卷了华夏大地的南方。待在温暖家中的我们,谁又知道家在千里之外,急于回家游子的心情呢?待在温暖家中的我们,谁又知道千千万万的人,为了我们的电力,为了我们不会受寒而付出了自己的血汗甚至是生命呢?------[color=red]there are people dying,if you care enough for the living,make a better place for you and for me
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如果说,天灾是无情,那么人挑起的战争,就只能用冷酷来形容。当人们拿起枪对着敌人开火的时候,他可否会想到,对方是孩子的父亲,孩子的依靠…………
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无论天灾也好,人祸也好,带给人们的,都只会是无限的伤痛。生命在这些灾难面前,是多么的脆弱啊!如果说上帝创造了人是一种恩赐,那么人自己制造的灾祸又是什么呢?
在这里,我衷心祝愿,地球的伤口,可以慢慢地痊愈,曾经经历过伤痛的人们,可以慢慢的回恢原来平静幸福的生活-------------heal the world,这就是我的祝愿。
[color=red]最后附上歌词:
there´s a place in
your heart
and i know that it is love
and this place could
be much
brighter than tomorrow
and if you really try
you´ll find there´s no need
to cry
in this place you´ll feel
there´s no hurt or sorrow
there are ways
to get there
if you care enough
for the living
make a little space
make a better place...
heal the world
make it a better place
for you and for me
and the entire human race
there are people dying
if you care enough
for the living
make a better place
for you and for me
if you want to know why
there´s a love that
cannot lie
love is strong
it only cares for
joyful giving
if we try
we shall see
in this bliss
we cannot feel
fear or dread
we stop existing and
start living
then it feels that always
love´s enough for
us growing
so make a better world
make a better world...
heal the world
make it a better place
for you and for me
and the entire human race
there are people dying
if you care enough
for the living
make a better place
for you and for me
and the dream we were
conceived in
will reveal a joyful face
and the world we
once believed in
will shine again in grace
then why do we keep
strangling life
wound this earth
crucify its soul
though it´s plain to see
this world is heavenly
be god´s glow
we could fly so high
let our spirits never die
in my heart
i feel you are all
my brothers
create a world with
no fear
together we´ll cry
happy tears
see the nations turn
their swords
into plowshares
we could really get there
if you cared enough
for the living
make a little space
to make a better place...
heal the world
make it a better place
for you and for me
and the entire human race
there are people dying
if you care enough
for the living
make a better place
for you and for me
heal the world
make it a better place
for you and for me
and the entire human race
there are people dying
if you care enough
for the living
make a better place
for you and for me
heal the world
make it a better place
for you and for me
and the entire human race
there are people dying
if you care enough
for the living
make a better place
for you and for me
there are people dying
if you care enough
for the living
make a better place
for you and for me
there are people dying
if you care enough
for the living
make a better place
for you and for me
you and for me
you and for me
you and for me……
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[color=red]说明一点:因为规则要求是文中不能有大量的歌词,因此,红色部分的歌词仅作补充,不列入正文字数。
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[[i] 本帖最后由 水滴柠檬 于 2008-7-7 01:00 编辑 [/i]]
李思宁 2008-7-1 20:26
虽然唔系个个都听得明英文歌,但系细则个度已经讲明“作品中可以采用一两句歌词(但不能多)”。
kong少 2008-7-5 22:47
Heal the world Michael Jackson
There's a place in your heart
And I know that it is love
And this place could be much brighter than tomorrow
And if you really try
You'll find there's no need to cry
In this place you'll feel there's no hurt or sorrow
There are ways to get there
If you care enough for the living
Make a little space
Make a better place...
Heal the world, make it a better place
For you and for me and the entire human race
There are people dying
If you care enough for the living
Make a better place for you and for me
If you want to know why
There's a love that cannot lie
Love is strong, it only cares of joyful giving
If we try, we shall see
In this bliss, we cannot feel fear or dread
We stop existing and start living
Then it feels that always
Love's enough for us growing
So make a better world
Make a better world...
And the dream we were conceived in
Will reveal a joyful face
And the world we once believed in
Will shine again in grace
Then why do we keep strangling life
Wound this earth. Crucify its soul
Though it's plain to see
This world is heavenly be God's glow
We could fly so high
Let our spirits never die
In my heart I feel you are all my brothers
Create a world with no fear
Together we cry happy tears
See the nations turn their swords into plowshares
We could really get there
If you cared enough for the living
Make a little space
To make a better place...
There are people dying
If you care enough for the living
Make a better place for you and for me
治癒這世界 麥可傑克森
在你心中有個地方
我知道那裡有愛
這個地方可以比明天更耀眼
如果你真的努力過
你會發覺不需哭泣
在這個地方,你感覺不到傷痛或煩憂
到那兒的路很多
如果你真心關懷生者
營造一些空間
創造一個更美好的地方…
治癒這世界,使它成為更好的地方
為你、為我,也為了全人類
不斷的有人死去
如果你真心關懷生者
為你,為我,創造一個更美好的地方
如果你想知道緣由
愛,它不會說謊
愛是堅強的,它在乎的是喜悅的奉獻
若我們嘗試,我們將明白
在喜樂中,我們感受不到恐懼與憂慮
我們不再只是活著,而是真正的開始生活
然後,那感覺將持續下去
愛足夠我們成長
創造一個更美好的世界
創造一個更美好的世界…
我們構思中的夢想
將展露喜悅的面貌
我們曾經信賴的世界
會在祥和中再次閃耀
然而,我們為何仍在扼殺生命
傷害了地球,處死其靈魂
雖然這很容易明白
這世界天生就是上帝的榮光
我們可以在高空飛翔
讓我們的精神不滅
在我心中,我感覺到你我都是兄弟
共同創造一個沒有恐懼的世界
我們一起流下喜悅的淚水
看著許多國家把刀劍變成了犁
我們真的可以做到
如果你真心關懷生者
營造一些空間
創造一個更美好的地方…
不斷的有人死去
如果你真心關懷生者
為你,為我創造一個更美好的地方
watch this MV here
source : 中文翻譯來自安德森 homeip.net
水滴柠檬 2008-7-6 00:07
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无言...........唔知讲咩好~
虽然歌词仅作补充,但所描述文字系米少佐D呢。..?
不过题材就值得赞下~WELL DONE !
jackylyd 2008-7-6 10:50
硬盘坏了也很地震了.............何况是人呢::em03:: ::em03::
浅浅 2008-7-18 23:12
令我林起我读大学个时的绿洲环保协会,,距地用呢首歌做会歌::em31:: ::em31::
浅浅 2008-7-18 23:14
令我林起我读大学个时的绿洲环保协会,,距地用呢首歌做会歌::em31:: ::em31::
水滴柠檬 2008-7-20 18:56
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[b][color=darkorchid]点评:[/color][/b]
[b][color=darkorchid] 普通的文字,细细描述身边事.[/color][/b]
[b][color=darkorchid] 特别是能引起共鸣,牵动你我的心~[/color][/b]
[b][color=darkorchid] 题材很好~不过歌曲不太配衬~[/color][/b]
[b][color=darkorchid] 93分.[/color][/b]
[[i] 本帖最后由 水滴柠檬 于 2008-7-21 00:00 编辑 [/i]]
李思宁 2008-7-20 23:55
点评:
文章不错,如果楼主可以添加多的心情文字更好。但系楼主添加嘅系英文歌,感觉怪怪地,而且文章里有大量歌词,楼主可有仔细阅读过活动细则?75分。
水滴柠檬 2008-7-21 23:43
[align=center][b][color=red]此作品平均分:87.75分[/color][/b][/align]